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A night
I will get for you girl popcorn
For your service girl I am born
There is a Van dam movie girl
Lets watch it, it is great my love
He is acting with a cute dove…
Let's see he makes lots of pearl
I love you … do you really know
Say I love you before I blow…...
See how he kisses his woman…..
See girl how love is beautiful……
My heart is great and colorful….
You are my love and my cute fan
My love this night is like a book…
See how love made it really look...
O love you are strange kind of light
Women only can see your heart…..
Your love girl is in my chores chart
You turn the color black to white…
You are my woman and my chick
Your love is what I love to pick…….
My love…girls are cotton candy........
I love you…girl you are my cake……
Swimmers love to swim in Love Lake
I love to drink you my brandy………..
My woman great love is like sand
We can touch it and music band…
Can also touch it… I love you……
Love is not a scholastic test………
Girl you don’t have to be the best
You are a chore I love to do…….
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By aljakal1 on 15 April, 2008, 2:14 pm
man, too much mistake , "chore"="shore"???
too long , and too much no space for the eye catching , no good ryme to make the ear want to continue reading it ,
i cna see you love her , express in more espressing situation not about pop corn and stuff, if i may add this critic ,
i did not feel atracted to read all this poem , make it more intresting
and more readable

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Category: Secret Love
Author: khaled Ahmed Bitar