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Dawn of Beauty
Dawning curious,
Suprised feel,
Cold hands,
From the shadow.
Warm fire,
Eyes desire,
A long reach,
Over the tall wall.
Worlds apart
Yet so close
Confused voice
Long lonely soul.
Soft breath
on my ears,
Gentle kiss
upon my cheek,
Rich scent
fills my nose,
Subtle touch
against my skin...
and beauty my heart cannot believe.
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By volgeirea on 26 April, 2011, 2:57 pm
Youre being as descriptive as you can with the least amount of words, it's really nice
By CJuala on 10 January, 2012, 1:26 am
you posted a comment on my poem, you said we almost have the sam estyle of writing..its weird.. you're right :) love this one (dawn of beauty)

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