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He dashes threw the open door,
to find her crying on the floor.
her arms are cut and all bruised up.
It happened again in this strange little dream,
the voices and thoughts were oh so mean.
he done this to her,
he just knew it.
how in the world
would he get threw this?
All the words he said to her
washing in his mind like a teribleflood,
as he closed his eyes & wiped up the blood.
Tears streaming down from his hazel eyes,
falling gently to her skin.
This was the time that he fell in.
into a black hole,
loseing everything,
even his soul.
his voice crying out,
his eyes awollen shut,
this is how he died,
he heart truely cut.
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By Seasgrace on 18 January, 2008, 12:18 pm
wow. Poignant, and very deep.
By luvsick_25 on 31 January, 2008, 8:58 am
wow... this poem's so good... so deep... (" ,)
By sourcebound on 26 February, 2008, 10:00 pm
the third stanza stands out from the rest on its own merit for its universal appeal. great work

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