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My Shadow
When my shadow is with me
Is my solitude complete?
When people get close to me
They stand on my shadow
Some stand on my shoulder
Some stand inside my heart
Some shift their feet
Some stands firm
In the company of others
My shadow shows
I am not free
All shadows are one
Is it the mark of my creator?
Are there shadows in heaven?
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By Seasgrace on 23 August, 2008, 9:25 pm
Hi Aj, long time no see lol I love the way you describe how people stand on your shadow, and what it may say about the character of the other person, and also what it says about how it affects you. I like the idea of connectiveness, and you leave the reader contemplating your questions about the everafter... math lol
So nice to see you posting again, Seas
By sourcebound on 25 August, 2008, 12:45 am
thanks seas

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Category: Friends & Family
Author: aj