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Our Love
Around you are a million twinkling stars;
In your eyes the shades of green in your sea;
I’m lost in the vastness of your gaze;
In your quivering lips a rhapsody;
In your breath the warm sigh of languishing hope;
Your heartbeat within my own, we are one soul.
Within each beat a million strings are played;
Each resonance holds their own;
Your fire etched upon this single strand of time,
As our love creates its song;
Each kiss is savored with sweet caress;
Gentle fingers know our form;
Our love is shared for safe keeping;
Long after the dusk becomes the dawn.
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By clande_stine on 5 June, 2008, 5:35 pm
This poem is perfect, you are way beyond novice, I would say expert, and I love your vocab. it's shows the intellectual side of your poems, and your metaphors are great...
By Seasgrace on 4 July, 2008, 6:23 pm
Thank you for your kind words. I'm always apprehensive about posting my poems. I'm never sure my form is acceptible and cohesive. I'm learning. Thanks!
Seas
By clande_stine on 25 August, 2008, 12:49 am
I am also learning to as I write. Most poems I post are just from coming to the site and writing as I go. I haven't actually wrote a poem on paper in a long time lol. But I totally love you posts so keep up the great work and it will all pay off for you.
C'lande Stines
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