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The look
Joe kissed me inthe spring
krystal in the fall,
but carla looked at me
and never kissed me at all
Joe's kiss was lost in jest,
krystals lost in play
but the kiss in carlas eyes
haunts me day and night
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By Robboml on 2 January, 2006, 8:58 pm
Hey Koolade, this is short but straight to the point and very good Keep it up!!
By Misunderstood_Demon on 10 January, 2006, 5:22 pm
this is avery touching poem and i loved it and read it and kept it in my mind because it happened to me too
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Category: Lost Love
Author: KoOlAdE