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Those Who Feel
Today i feel and smell
the copper on my finger's,
the note compensates
with the split second
of finding out
what just happen??...
I feel your pain
and those who were the closet to you,
Like conjoined souls.....
divine is deep...
but the line between
your loved ones
and you
is much closer
I know all the combustion
and tension in my body must go
and i must release all thoughts
and feeling's
knowing that you had to leave,
you left behind such love,
such emotion that was consistent
to the people that will miss you
I hardly knew you
but i must assume the best
for the rest that did,
I'm sure you were
the best you will be missed
forever...
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By Tori456 on 9 September, 2010, 5:34 pm
i really like this one (:
keep it up
Tori
By delapaul19 on 9 September, 2010, 11:32 pm
Thanks Tori! (:

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