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Treasured Heart
Look upon a treasure.
Your form a sensual view.
With lust inside my mind.
This heart now beats anew.
My toughts have turned to pleasure.
My focus only on you.
Of tender touch and kisses.
Raining down like morning dew.
Like a sunshower from the heavens.
From a sky that's pastel blue.
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When my passion has no measure.
And controls beyond my grasp.
My need to be a part of you.
Comes from more than just my heart.
And once we have loved.
And lay entwined in arms.
There is naught in life to measure.
Your beauty, love and charms.
It's you who gives me pleasure.
As you touch my soul so deep.
It's your heart that is my treasure.
As together we fall to sleep.
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By alexander on 15 August, 2005, 5:21 am
I wrote this poem for the one i love and would appreciate any comments good or bad to help me become better at writing. this was my sixth attempt at a poem.
By amanda on 15 August, 2005, 5:28 pm
I love your poem and continue writing more because this one is touching
By hsbanana on 15 August, 2005, 7:15 pm
wow i love it. its very touching, so sweet. i enjoyed it.
By holypinkgurl on 16 August, 2005, 9:56 pm
awwww... so sweet.. =)

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Category: Sensual Love
Author: lagrag (me)