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winter
it's when the sun is hidden
it's when the spring is gone
it's when the rain starts pourin'
it's when our story began
it's when the tears are fallin'
it's when the music fades away
it's when you heart stops beating
it's when i told you "stay"
it's when the night is cold
it's when i breathed my silent prayers
it's when a mystery was told
it's when you gently whispered
"it's when you walked away"
it's when the autumn star starts to cry
it's when i had the strength to say
when i started singing, "sweet goodbye.."
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By Andynz2000 on 20 August, 2010, 6:22 pm
good poem....repetition gives a strong structure but personally i dont like starting the same line too many times

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