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Without you
This is actually a song that i wrote, but i thought posting it here wont be bad idea after after all
You left me forsaken
Like an empty ship on the coast
Is this the price that I had to pay
For having treasured you the most?
We played, we danced
Sometimes shed a tears few
Have you forgotten what you once said
I meant everything to you
Chorus:
I washed your tears whenever you wept
All the promises that I made, I kept
I sat by you while you slept
If you turn around, you’ll still find me.
Your presence will still lingers me
Whether you are close to me or not
Memories and hopes that you’ll come back to me
Are the only things that I’ve got.
Chorus:
I washed your tears whenever you wept
All the promises that I made, I kept
I sat by you while you slept
If you turn around, you’ll still find me.
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comments

By Farhan on 7 July, 2008, 2:24 pm
your poem has a well thought plot and basic idea. But you should choose a more appropriate varieties of words. Keep writing
By sudhadarla on 3 August, 2008, 9:41 pm
Abhinav, i started off with one and u kept me going , i now reading all ur postings... good job

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