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you took from me
sometimes the wind finds me crying,
and part of me lied when i said im living,
when infact im dying,
i feel my sweet slow death take all of me,
and theres nothing in my heart but my dark whole,
and walking to a my tomb is very cold,
i need peace but cant find the location of it,
and my soul gets that much closer to breaking life,
and part of me feeds every night,
taking me under the sweet lovely knife,
but you created that for me in my demise,
but love is very cold and cruel,
there for i should be to,
you took everything i own from me,
including life that beated inside me,
a he and she that would have loved the blue sky,
but all ruined by your endless lies,
holding my mistakes against me,
making traps and not letting me free,
now your turn is comming from the dark,
walks become a long hall way,
and unsafe strolls in the park,
people with eyes of pain,
telling why i fall into hate,
freedome is what i want and the life that was there,
but your cruel soul wouldnt care,
all my emotions that hold back arent far,
nearly inside you now,
do you love the fact you took my every being?,
took the last thing from me,
now im all alone and without them,
and now the moon shines on black sparkled streams.
no more questions on why you took them,
but why you keep me?,
and why im not fine anymore?,
but thats why i'm called scorned,
because of you,
and now you need me more,
cant fly without your wings,
stuck here with me,
all because you took from me.
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By rezangels on 1 October, 2010, 11:37 pm
its not ment to be a love poem or love that is love but revenge and hatred... dont like it dont read it...
By Andynz2000 on 8 October, 2010, 4:13 am
Strong poem. well written.

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